Dear home-grown speakers ... do you reflect on these sentence manufacture sense to you?

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Based on the explanation of the group (as shown in the table below – result of the discussion), the group have earned some profits but the other costs (consumption and salt) are not included contained by the capital (only the purchase of fish specifically categorized as capital). It means that until that time sharing the profits the group must firstly prioritize the use of the capital for the sustainability of the business (given the reality that the capital that be spent for fish processing activity ultimate week is Rp. 1,625,000, not Rp. 1,470,000). Therefore, the profit is not Rp. 528,000, but Rp. 373,000.

Answers:    A few run on sentences and the () are really not necessary. If you are referring to table number your tables. (Table A-1, Table b, etc.)

Based on the explanation of the group as shown contained by the table below; (Result of the Discussion), the group has earn some profits but the other costs of consumption and salt are not included contained by the capital; lone the purchase of fish that is categorized as means. It means that in the past sharing the profits the group must first prioritize the use of the capital for the sustainability of the business. Given the certainty that the capital spent for fish processing hobby last week is Rp. 1,625,000, not Rp. 1,470,000, the profit is not Rp. 528,000, but Rp. 373,000.
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